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Drama at the Bar

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A piece for class that is still in progress. Just wanted to post something! I welcome critiques I know there is a lot of work needed. So don't go too crazy!
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I like this alot. If you decide to color it Id make the counter in front be really dark and keep the dishes more suttle. after looking at it for a while (and ill try to explain this right) the man in front has a great pose I like the leaning over and his back boming out DONT CHANGE THAT. when you get down to the pants they seem to swing arond and alot of it is because of the pockets. but its starting to look like were looking at his butt from straight on rather than from the angle the rest of him is. otherwise I really REALLY like this and I think with some mood lighting this has alot of potential!